betrayal by Lizzy B

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Submission Name: betrayal dots

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Author:	Lizzy B
ASL Info:	17/F/la-la land (MI)
Elite Ratio:	3.56 - 79/67/40
Words:	81

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	855
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	511

Description:
All cheating hearts should die. This is what I believe.

betrayal dots

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We seemed so happy
And then you hurt me
It went for so long
How could I not see?

You were seeing her
How did I not know?
I thought you loved me
Like I loved you so

I found you with her
You weren't expecting me
You didn't know I was there
Until you heard me scream

I stood in the doorway
And watched you kiss her
I heard my heart break
It'll never ment, I'm sure.

Submitted on 2006-06-29 19:18:05 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Nice poem, this seems to happen a lot today, you captured the essence very nicely from a girls point of view, and very true to the point. But a few grammar errors that could be cleaned up.
-Xingu
| Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by xingu32 | [ Reply to This ]
  hey thats good. keep at it!!
| Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by butterflygirl27 | [ Reply to This ]
  Awww. . . this is so sad. If this is from your true life, I am sorry this happend to you. It was a good pice though. Keep on writing. And I hope you find a better guy.

Sarah
| Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]

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