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    dots Submission Name: The Family Treedots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 715
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    Description:
       About a bad history in the family tree


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    dotsThe Family Treedots
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    Each leaf on this tree
    Has fallen from a branch of bad luck,
    Each seed has grown to bestow this crown of shame,
    While falling down
    to the ground
    they look around they see,
    their surroundings improve
    as theirs just gets worse,
    and they start to ask questions like...

    "How am I supposed to carry
    your weight when my own weight,
    is more than enough for me?,
    and how am I supposed to carry
    your weight when my own weight
    is way too much for me?
    and it's breaking my 'young' spine."




    Submitted on 2006-06-30 13:12:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Personal it may be, but it seems like the makings for good lyrics. Everybody has sucker branches that need trimming, but getting around to it, and telling of it, are what needs to fulfill this journey. Love to see the finished product.
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by coyote | [ Reply to This ]


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