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    dots Submission Name: A talk with a Smart-Suitdots
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    Author: WriterX
    ASL Info:    18/Male/Poland
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 68/126/83
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 1311
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 780



    Description:
       Alright, small experiment. Read this now. The whole thing. And once you finish try to think what could I possibly mean...

    If you do not know here is a small tip, although it is a key which only opens one of the many possible answers. He has something to do with politics.


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    dotsA talk with a Smart-Suitdots
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    Yes, you think that you are smart.
    Those ready buttons,
    That plain white shirt,
    Not a piece of dust on you.

    But I can see
    Beyond your face,
    All your holes
    And all you stitches.

    You are no better
    Than any other suit,
    All you have
    Is a smart short name.

    And although people watch you,
    Admire you and wish you luck,
    They are only charmed
    By your sleeve and collar.

    But you couldn't feed everyone,
    Your charm is already gone,
    We stand here, an angry crowd,
    And we curse your very look.

    Now, to all,
    You are a piece of cloth,
    Something servants use
    To clean to the dirty floors.




    Submitted on 2006-06-30 13:37:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HI Writer X,

    When I read it the first time, it made me think of a guy I used to work with, who was promoted to management and all of a sudden he had to start wearing suits. He would iron only the front part of his shirt that showed under the jacket. and leave the rest all wrinkly. I don't know what that means but thanks for bringing me a laugh today!

    I'll read it a few more times and try to figure out something a little deeper.

    Annie
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by annie0888 | [ Reply to This ]
      Poland - im unaware of ur political players. But here maybe it could apply to bush - course he never even pretended to want to feed the poor. Or maybe putin? i dunno, he only really pretended to want to bring back the soviet union. Who knows - really most sucessful politicians have short easy to remember names. So i guess it could b any of those 'lesser of two evils' fellows we trust to advocate our interests. I think the most important part of politics is the dissent, so obviously this is a fav for me. I'd imagine our problems in the U.S. and poland are very different - but then likely very much the same.
    shard
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by particularshard | [ Reply to This ]


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