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    dots Submission Name: Blasphemy!!dots
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    Author: Imadjinn
    ASL Info:    17/M/Neverwhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 340/348/146
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 1165
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 767



    Description:
       Ok, so there are some really bad jokes here, and the cathloc church is going to excommunicate me, but hey, at least I had fun.


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    dotsBlasphemy!!dots
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    Look, Up in the sky...
    it's a bird,
    no it's a plane...
    no, it's POPEMAN!

    Popeman rides in the Popemobile,
    like Batman rides in the Batmobile.
    sidekick Robin plays with his toys,
    but he ain't got nothing on Altarboy!

    Just talking about Blasphemy,
    Blaspheyou,
    Blasphe-everybody in the room!

    Lex and Magneto try to foil plans,
    but no one's more devious than homo-man,
    he comes around making everyone sick,
    Popeman saves the day with Jesus-disks.

    Talking about Blasphemy,
    Blaspheyou,
    Blasphe-everybody in the room!
    Just Blasphemy,
    Blaspheyou,
    Blasphe-everybody in the room!!




    Submitted on 2006-06-30 23:11:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well, Popeman's no match for me with my gang of machine gun holding camuels (yeah I know camel doesn't have a 'u' in it, but that 'u' is magical. It turns normal camels into supery doopery camuels) and the elves I stole from Santa. Muahahahaa! World domination will be mine!

    On a less serious note: Interesting write. Made me smile.
    | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by Seele | [ Reply to This ]
      I'l bet Popeman could beat your camuels. Thanks for your comment on Blasphemy!!, it was a spur of the moment peice, after actially seeing a "Battle Pope" comic book.
    Thanks again
    Brian
    | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by Imadjinn | [ Reply to This ]
      Ohhhhhhh MGosh!
    LOLOLOL!
    Hysterical!
    Popeman! LOLOL!
    You may have even named this "Super-Pope!"
    Very, very original.
    Please, keep writing...I'll be watching for more of your stuff!
    Kimmy
    | Posted on 2006-07-01 00:00:00 | by KimmyMim | [ Reply to This ]
      Look! Up in the sky...
    it's a bird,
    it's a plane...
    no, it's POPEMAN!

    Popeman rides in the Popemobile,
    like Batman rides in the Batmobile.
    sidekick Robin plays with his toys,
    but he ain't got nothing on Altarboy!

    Just talking about Blasphemy,
    Blaspheyou,
    Blasphe-everybody in the room!

    Lex and Magneto try to foil plans,
    but no one's more devious than homo-man,
    he comes around making everyone sick,
    Popeman saves the day with Jesus-disks.

    Talking about Blasphemy,
    Blaspheyou,
    Blasphe-everybody in the room!
    Just Blasphemy,
    Blaspheyou,
    Blasphe-everybody in the room!!


    Yeah, you'll probably find yourself under the wheels of the big Popemobile soon enough (I wonder if the model is an Auto de Fe?). For an encore I imagine you'll skewer Big George at a Texas barbeque ( on a spit, no less). If I had one nitpick it might be tying those who profess a belief to the object of their profession. I've no doubt Jesus is as sick of the chicanery as you are; however, He strikes people dead much less often than the world might like.

    Ah, well...

    Bizarrely, nicely done.
    Bill.
    | Posted on 2006-07-01 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      very... original.... okay, screw constructive comments, I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was amazing. One of my main "things" i guess is the catholic church and the controversy around it... that was just hallarious as all h*ll. i loved it. good write.
    _Kat
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by PsychoBabble214 | [ Reply to This ]


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