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    dots Submission Name: Still In Lovedots
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    Author: EsCaPisT
    ASL Info:    17,Female,Singapore
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 42/38/38
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
    Total Views: 864
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 528



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    dotsStill In Lovedots
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    It's been in a while
    Since i think of you
    Far from a mile
    Love you, i do

    You're not the same
    I feel the change
    You're into fame
    And popularity range

    Different guy, different style
    Who are you, still not true?
    When i gazed into your file
    Found the face, got a clue.

    But deep inside,
    I'm sure you'll see
    However much you change
    To what you can be
    You still feel for me.




    Submitted on 2006-07-01 00:53:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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