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    dots Submission Name: Karmadots
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    Author: EsCaPisT
    ASL Info:    17,Female,Singapore
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 42/38/38
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 948
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 635



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    dotsKarmadots
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    The tender heart taught you right
    To show how you fight
    So we don't talk every night
    I don't reminisce if you're by my side.

    Like deep concern would do
    I told you what is true
    You pushed it away
    As if i'm here to betray.

    She would never listen
    All she does is glisten
    Her tears when she's sad
    But always gets mad.

    She broke your heart
    And tore it apart
    Don't you come back
    Just face the fact
    It's just karma reacting
    And through the back it's stabbing.




    Submitted on 2006-07-01 01:02:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      meh, someone after my body-eh?
    haha jk.
    i don't have anything bad to say about it.
    beautifully written.
    | Posted on 2007-02-07 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]


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