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    dots Submission Name: Rhythm Nationdots
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    Author: Chihuahuii
    ASL Info:    16/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 75/90/36
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 198
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 931



    Description:
       Emminent domain and gentrification = EVIL.


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    dotsRhythm Nationdots
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    Freefall of a rhythm nation losing the patriotic beat.
    Reconnaissance detects
    Invisible waterfalls of tears
    Sweeping off success
    From a ghetto neighborhood that anxiously awaits
    Gentrification.
    Observation confirms the
    Rhythm Nation Hypothesis:
    If we put them together they thrive, but take them apart and they
    Tank like the dreams of the man with repossession screams
    Echoing through city streets
    From a 2x2 lot evicted through a plot to take over
    One imminent domain at a time.

    I don't know what I'd call this kind of war.

    Shut down the streets
    Turn us off, turn us loose
    And snap one for posterity
    'Cause we don't know if we'll be here
    Another year.

    Most of us are nomads
    Of the concrete-sanctioned
    Emancipated
    Rhythm Nation.




    Submitted on 2006-07-01 13:49:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nicely done, I like your style here. It's quite us and them, and I very much like the integral theme of the piece.

    Sorry that I have nothing constructive, just thought I'd let you know I liked it.

    be happy

    Graeme

    | Posted on 2006-07-01 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]



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