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    dots Submission Name: Final Endingdots
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    Author: Lizzy B
    ASL Info:    17/F/la-la land (MI)
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 79/67/40
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 1066
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 759



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    dotsFinal Endingdots
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    There's a boom and a flash
    Bright colors fill the sky
    Children laugh and clap
    On the fourth of July

    A girtl stands alone
    watching out her window
    completely isolated from
    Those watching the bright show

    Tears course down her cheeks
    As she stares at the fun
    A baby grew in her stomach
    When her boyfriend heard he had run

    She no longer remembered
    The song her heart had sang
    She pulled the trigger, ending her life
    The fireworks covering the bang

    When he came back that night
    to say they would be okay
    He found the pool of blood
    beneath the window where she lay.

    And he cried...




    Submitted on 2006-07-02 09:24:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this poem. its good. keep it up
    | Posted on 2006-07-30 00:00:00 | by butterflygirl27 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, very strong poem, but very well written
    | Posted on 2006-07-06 00:00:00 | by Freespyryt554 | [ Reply to This ]


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