Description: This is a birthday poem for Liz Army. A person I have known almost all my life who died of cancer. Her mother now takes care of her 2 daughters. She would have been 30 on july 3rd 2006.
That's very sweet of you. It felt like you were not only wishing her the best but also reassuring her that things are okay down here so she can relax. I like that. Not so mournful as most... more of a note filled with warm wishes for a friend who's passed. I only saw one error: in the first two stanzas when you use "your" it should be "you're" because its a short word for "you are." The usage of "your" in the last two stanzas is right, though. Kudos on a heartwarming birthday wish. Jessica
Submission Name: Happy Birthday Liz R.I.P
