Wow... I think I coudl sit and ponder this poem for a long time, you really said a lot in that last line there. Well done. I am definitely adding this to my favorites. Thanks a lot for writing this, I enjoyed it a lot.
This is really pretty. Like it's a beautiful poem, because I love the scenery of nature that you used to describe yourself as something which makes the place beautiful, and then the last line is really what tied the whole poem together, and I just love the words you used, and you seem like someone who enjoys nature, and so do I, so I can appreciate this poem, and I think a lot of people will too! Amazing job. But it is a little sad, but, it's a great, because you are the beauty in his barren desert. Bless. Peace,love,light,euphoria, Aya
Very nice use of oxymorons. It fits together well. Two typos: wost > worst and darkenss > darkness.
Some remarks on the second stanza: Precious gem in rocky haven Cracking fire in Arctic snow Grassy field in desert forever this line seems the weakest to me, it repeats the second part of line one, you might consider changing the second half. a thought: in arid lands Hearing ‘yes’ after expecting ‘no’. this line seems to me to break the regular rhythm you've established. what about deleting 'after'? I think the line would work fine without it both for meaning (after is redundant: expecting no can only occur before you hear the yes) and meter.