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    dots Submission Name: dancedots
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    Author: closebutremote
    ASL Info:    22/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 54/77/16
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 981
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 538



    Description:
       im drunk right now... so i wrote somethin


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    dotsdancedots
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    we're the dreams you're believing
    so whats it gonna take believer
    we're gonna dance all night
    we're gonna fuck up your ego
    we're gonna fire up the racecar
    we're gonna drive all night
    we're gonna make you cry

    now don't go tellin anyone
    you'll be just fine
    you're gonna ask a lotta questions
    then you'll be pushed around
    just go with the flow
    and you'll be alright






    Submitted on 2006-07-04 02:21:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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