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    dots Submission Name: necessitydots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsnecessitydots
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    You took something from me
    the last time you came back
    you took my loneliness
    but now you gave it back
    i ignore it, because i don't want it
    because of how it reminds me of you
    i shrug it off, it doesn't exist
    but then my dreams come back to you

    i hate this feeling of disease inside
    it's eating away my heart and pride
    some say man does not cry
    but to me, how can a man be a man if he cannot cry?

    My pain is torture with no release
    one tear is all i need to breathe
    and so i suffocate slowly
    without you i am misery

    if you ask me what i want i have the answer
    i want you
    if you ask me what i need i could not say
    what to do

    i want to see you but do i need it?
    i want to kiss you but do i need it?
    i want to hold you but do i need it?
    i want to love you but do you need it?




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