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don't just do

Author: BlazeFlamme
ASL Info:    22/m/TX
Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 23 /161 /138
Words: 88
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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don't just do

if you cried would you tell me?
so i could try to dry your tears
if you cared would i know?
so i wouldn't feel alone
if you loved me would you show it?
so i could express my love too
if i hurt you, you'd let me know it?
so i could know to hurt myself
if i left you, you'd find better?
because they'd be crazy to ever leave you
if i lost you would you forget me?
to ease the pain that we both feel

Submitted on 2006-07-04 04:30:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is so sad and made me feel so sad.
i wish all the love to you, bro :P
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