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    dots Submission Name: don't just dodots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 864
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dotsdon't just dodots
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    if you cried would you tell me?
    so i could try to dry your tears
    if you cared would i know?
    so i wouldn't feel alone
    if you loved me would you show it?
    so i could express my love too
    if i hurt you, you'd let me know it?
    so i could know to hurt myself
    if i left you, you'd find better?
    because they'd be crazy to ever leave you
    if i lost you would you forget me?
    to ease the pain that we both feel




    Submitted on 2006-07-04 04:30:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is so sad and made me feel so sad.
    i wish all the love to you, bro :P
    | Posted on 2015-07-28 00:00:00 | by happymoon | [ Reply to This ]


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