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    dots Submission Name: The Angel Who Did Nothingdots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Angel Who Did Nothingdots
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    She watched me cry myself to sleep at night
    And sit in the corner at school as my peers laugh and play
    Wondering why I donít have any friends
    She listened as I sent up a prayer
    Wishing for life to get better
    She was sent by the man who listened to every word I prayed
    And watched as every tear fell down my cheek
    Every mean word coming out of their mouths
    Yet she did nothing other than listen and pity me

    She watched as I started missing school
    And not coming home at night
    She watched as my grades started to decline
    And I got more beatings at home
    She watched me turn black and blue
    And watched when I quit eating
    She watched me turn thin and weak
    Until one day she watched me no more




    Submitted on 2006-07-04 14:12:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow that was quite the poem, i must admit that i do like it... it made me think of a mirror. And as the reflection as the angel.. yourself, watching yourself, knowing what is happening but allowing it to happen till one day where you stopped caring at all... but that just my opinion... but i did like it!!! thanks for sharing.... i will definetly read more
    | Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by DaRaven | [ Reply to This ]


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