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Author: Freespyryt554
ASL Info:    18/F/OR
Elite Ratio:    1.85 - 46 /41 /30
Words: 122
Class/Type: Misc /Love
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Average Vote:    5.0000
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If I could take away your pain, I would
But I'm only human
If I could stop all your hurting, I would
But I just can't
If only you knew how much I want to,
But you don't
Do you think I'm bluffing? Do your really think I'd lie?
Don't you know that I love you more than that?
I'll take the pain tonight

I want to take the trouble from your shoulders
You don't need that yoke to bear
I want you to live the life you expected
Not the one you've been forced to live
People don't know your circumstances
I do love, I do
Since I can't take your pain away, love
I'll say a prayer for you

Submitted on 2006-07-05 03:00:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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