Pain

Author: Freespyryt554 ASL Info:    18/F/OR Elite Ratio:    1.85 - 46 /41 /30 Words: 122

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Pain

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If I could take away your pain, I would But I'm only human If I could stop all your hurting, I would But I just can't If only you knew how much I want to, But you don't Do you think I'm bluffing? Do your really think I'd lie? Don't you know that I love you more than that? I'll take the pain tonight I want to take the trouble from your shoulders You don't need that yoke to bear I want you to live the life you expected Not the one you've been forced to live People don't know your circumstances I do love, I do Since I can't take your pain away, love I'll say a prayer for you

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