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    dots Submission Name: Crowning Darknessdots
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    Author: Ganesa
    ASL Info:    18/F/lost in thought
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 3/3/9
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsCrowning Darknessdots
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    The way of life is
    Hereby ended.
    Everyday is now
    Going without stopping.

    Realization finally
    Emerges to show
    A new way through
    The light.

    Darkness has
    Arrived to
    Reveal the shadowed
    Kingdom from which
    No one can leave.

    Everyone must
    Stay and learn
    So they can die.




    Submitted on 2006-07-05 10:32:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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