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    dots Submission Name: Trippindots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Something I wrote some days ago.


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    It seems that everybody's trippin,
    Every time it comes to me,
    Solitude and disgust keeps creeping
    When all these lies disperse in the air,
    Finally to be freed.

    I live a life of sorrow,
    And the burden is an ember of fire,
    My hopes stay so hollow
    And my heart is growing very tired.

    Tired of living a life of hate,
    Loneliness, and a forsaken fate;
    With no one to relate,
    I sit, weep,
    And by holding my tears,
    I let these words
    Do the crying for me.




    Submitted on 2006-07-06 15:18:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey bubz im feelin you with this one, i think so many people can relate, your not alone, i liked this,
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia
    | Posted on 2006-07-06 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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