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    dots Submission Name: Sun Roomdots

    Author: metalman_21
    ASL Info:    17/m/NE
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 30/42/17
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Two of my friends have commited suicide this year, and I wrote a little poem for them.

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    dotsSun Roomdots

    The blinds are pulled open.
    I awake to the youthful yellow sun,
    tap-dancing across my thousand-pound eyelids.
    Slowly, the universe around me comes into view,
    and I recall that the world outside my sun room,
    is both pain and salvation.
    A phone lightly chimes in the midst of reminisence,
    and I watch myself pick up the reciever./

    The shades are pulled shut.
    The Crimson orb I used to welcome is blocked from view,
    its blood-red appearence and warmth,
    hindered by a thousand 12 inch lineoleum strips.
    Two more are gone.
    Cody and Kyle.
    Victims of the twisted world outside my sun-room,
    and martyrs of their own emotional war./

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