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    dots Submission Name: Love is.dots
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    Author: kellz
    ASL Info:    25/F/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 122/148/49
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 393
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       How i am in love with alan at his brothers funrual we kissed and i got butterflies alth he is my bestfriend i an in love with him totaly forever and some one elses personality this person i have not meet and dont know his age he has a great sence of humor


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    dotsLove is.dots
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    Love is not knowing how or why,
    And not caring for that matter.

    Love is spending time with you,
    Even if only briefly.

    Love is caring,
    Like no one else matters but you.

    Love is wanting,
    Your lips to touch mine.

    Love is hoping,
    For you to go out with me.

    Love is doin' anything,
    Just for you.

    I love you,
    With all my heart.

    Will we ever go out?
    It's up to you.

    So what do you say?
    Be mine or no?

    I love you Alan,
    Please write me back.

    I truly love you.





    Submitted on 2004-05-15 18:21:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      lovelovelovelovelovelove...lovelovelovelove
    I think your feelings took over this poem... in a bad way. The repitition is quite annoying(sorry) Sort of angst. maybe add imagery @ least?
    | Posted on 2004-05-15 00:00:00 | by roxygirl239 | [ Reply to This ]
      i think that the ideas behind the poem are great but not sure about the flow of the poem. but i can relate about loving some one like that
    | Posted on 2004-05-15 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      hhhmmm, weelll I have to say this made for an interesting read..
    There was a free form run, and then a little rhyme added, I think it could have done without that.
    I can appreciate the simplicty of this piece, because the emotions that drive love are anything but, and it's not easy to simplify.
    ORA
    | Posted on 2004-05-15 00:00:00 | by Oracle | [ Reply to This ]



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