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    dots Submission Name: The Children and The Clouds (REVISED)dots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    18 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 21/37/26
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 114
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    dotsThe Children and The Clouds (REVISED)dots
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    The Children and The Clouds
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    The children sit in the morning breeze
    They watch the clouds go by
    One yells,"I see a rabbit!"
    Another shouts,"Better yet, I see a truck!"
    They do this for several hours
    They go back and forth
    One must outdo the other
    A little girl with curls passes by
    She giggles at thier game
    Then asks if she can play
    They boys say,"Sure, Why not?"
    And their close friendship forms
    Years later after graduation
    That blond-haired girl points to the sky
    She says,"I see a car!"
    One boy yells,"No, I see a church!"
    The other shouts,"I see us, together forever!"
    Five years later after the wedding
    The blond-haired girl looks up to the sky
    She says,"I see a groom."
    One boy says,"I see the wedding limo."
    The other boy says,"I see my bride & I together."
    Three years later at the hospital
    That blond-haired girl has triplets
    One boy comes to visit
    The other boy gushes like a proud father should
    The mother looks outside her window at the sky
    She syas,"I see a crib."
    One boy says,"I see 3 crying babies."
    The other boy says,"I see our beautiful family together."
    Seven years later those kids are in the grass
    The blond-haired girl points at the clouds
    She says,"I see mommy."
    One brother says,"I see daddy & our uncle."
    The other brother says,"I see all 6 of us together forever!"






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