I want to live again...

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I want to live again...

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You turned away but didn't go nor did u stay always around but just outside my reach what kind of decision is that? what kind of love is that? You can bear t onot see me but not bear to not be out of touch but I can't bear either I need t osee you to touch you to feel you to hear you I'm not alove anymore but neither can I die for that would mean losing this little too what do I do how do I go on How do I exist how do you exist.. teach me.. so I can live too So I can live again....

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