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I want to live again...

Author: SGS
ASL Info:    29/F/PK
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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My Chaos...

I want to live again...

You turned away
but didn't go
nor did u stay
always around
but just outside my reach
what kind of decision is that?
what kind of love is that?
You can bear t onot see me
but not bear to not be out of touch
but I can't bear either
I need t osee you
to touch you
to feel you
to hear you
I'm not alove anymore
but neither can I die
for that would mean
losing this little too
what do I do
how do I go on
How do I exist
how do you exist..
teach me.. so I can live too
So I can live again....

Submitted on 2006-07-08 05:11:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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