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    Author: obaid
    ASL Info:    21/M/Gauntlet
    Elite Ratio:    4.52 - 148/93/34
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    To seek refuge from my emotions, I seek solitude.

    I'm better off alone
    'Cause when solitary, to sadness I'm not prone.

    I am made to suffer unending emotions
    Emotions that are inseparable from the effect of love.

    I don't know what love means anymore!
    As i loved "somebody" truly
    While she decieved me, and unsettled my core!

    Despair leads to sadness and change...
    I'm despair...and i've changed.
    Loving her was a mistake and by my mistakes-
    I'm always shamed!

    My hunt for love begins and ends
    As unworthy love binds and releases me.
    I hunt love no more as
    Love has forsaken me!




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      This was very well written. Reading it I felt sorrow, pain, and loss. I know none of those are pleasent feelings. I'm sorry you have to feel them. Recently, I have been through this same situation, and I know how much it hurts. But I have a little ray of hope in finding true love once more. I hope you find yours as well. Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading.

    Always,
    XE.L.MX
    | Posted on 2006-07-08 00:00:00 | by heartofxwinterx | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow , i loved this poem i can relate to it like hell at the moment, but something i keep telling myself is that no matter how many times i get hurt im alive..i made it..im thankful for that..u can give up on love..but love will find you it always does u may be hurt again yes but. ask yourself this is a few weeks years even of hurting, crying feeling like ur dying. Is it worth to you an eternity of happiness? or do u want to give up and live like that forever
    ~ With Love Ashley
    | Posted on 2006-07-08 00:00:00 | by OscuraAmor | [ Reply to This ]
      This was an awseom poem. It showed a bunch of emotions but at the same time . . . . . it kinda stayed on topic. This was a great write.

    ~ Gotham Freak ~
    | Posted on 2006-07-08 00:00:00 | by GothamFreak | [ Reply to This ]


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