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    Author: obaid
    ASL Info:    21/M/Gauntlet
    Elite Ratio:    4.52 - 148/93/34
    Words: 225
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 1424
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1344



    Description:
       something hillariously stupid but still funny....


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    dotsSWAPdots
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    It was you on my mind, you on the walls
    It was you everywhere.
    I canít remember you now
    Blonde? Brunette? Did you even have hair?

    Amazing how things changed, how I changed!
    I used to smile before and now I canít stop laughing.
    ĎCause Jane, Susy, Fiona and all of them
    Stay overnight and on my bed we do a little friction-dancing!

    To you I use to say ďIíll call you at ten.Ē
    Now I get numerous messages on my phone from girls
    And, I donít remember them!

    These days when Iím walking down ĎBoulevard 69í
    I think of you and how much I really loved youÖ
    I remember you giving me the ďcanít love you-letís be friendsĒ shi*.
    Tables have turned, you feel lonely and solitarily you sit.

    It all changed when I went to bed with your best friend;
    She enjoyed it and spread word about my magic stick.
    Since then all I did was sit around and they came and
    Turned me into a college hottie from a soccer freak!

    Wordís that you are telling people you had turned me down
    Guess what, it has become the yearís best joke!
    You turned your back on my true love and now
    Youíre and outcast, youíre friendless and
    Jeez! You were even dumped by that nerdy bloke!




    Submitted on 2006-07-08 05:41:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a great poem. I love the imagery in it.

    This was my fave part:

    It was you on my mind, you on the walls
    It was you everywhere.
    I canít remember you now
    Blonde? Brunette? Did you even have hair?


    ^ It is so true because it is what we all go through . . . . . . memories fading.

    ~ Gotham Freak ~

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    | Posted on 2006-07-10 00:00:00 | by GothamFreak | [ Reply to This ]
      HAHAHAHAHAHA, that's ROADKILL!!! So, word spread about your magic stick, eh? And Boulevard 69? Somthing must have changed drastically... Tell me aboot it???
    | Posted on 2006-07-12 00:00:00 | by Saaber | [ Reply to This ]


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