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The tie to sever

Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60 /93 /58
Words: 63
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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The tie to sever

Too many identities to remember
I forget a lie once told
And forget again the ties to sever.

I disconnect and logout
My mind wandering in a field
Of bluebirds and lilies.

He loves me, he loves me not.
He loves me not, he loves me

This poetess ignores it but still wonders:

"Is this the tie to sever?"

Submitted on 2006-07-08 09:47:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked this alot...It made sense, but left you confused at the same time, strange. But it was pretty cool, it was sweet.

| Posted on 2006-07-08 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]

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