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the boy i used to date


Author: juss_kriss
ASL Info:    23/F/Canada
Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 404 /445 /126
Words: 227
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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Description:


Based on what I would call an excuse to why I can't be with the one I love. Things do change between people, but if you still feel the same way inside as you did when you were together, you can't say that too much has changed, it's still the same inside.

(please don't comment on how i'm too young to love because i have heard it too many times before and unless you honestly know me, you can't say if it's the typical teenage "oh i think i'm in love" bullshit or not. thank you.)


the boy i used to date



verse 1:
how many times
do you have to say
it's over
before it really ends
how many times
are you goin' to say
you don't love me
till thers's truth
in your words

pre-chorus:
how many times
do you have to tell yourself
that things have changed
before you realize
that inside, it's still the same

chorus:
you're still the boy i used to date
and i'm still the girl who will wait
wait for a chance to prove to you
that this love you're feeling is real
and it will never come to an end
no matter how you convince yourself
every feeling inside, hasn't changed

verse 2:
how many times
do i have to cry
till i'm done
i am sick of cryin'
how many times
will i speak my mind
and say the words
i don't mean
i wonder

pre-chorus

chorus

verse 3:
things have changed
but it's still the same
deep inside
that's where you try to hide
but i know
that you're just foolin'
them and yourself
why are you
so afraid?

pre-chorus

chorus

coda:
how many times
do you have to tell yourself
that things have changed
before you realize
that inside it's still the same
you're still the boy i used to date




Submitted on 2006-07-08 12:56:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really enjoyed the poem "The Boy I Use To Date" very much and I really liked the message very much. I thought it was sincere. Now I have a big question. I am a singer and am currently purssuring my dream, my passion to sing love songs, heartbreak, you know those types. Now If I were to use your lyrics with your consent of course I would love to be able to do that.....its truly up to you. I loved these lyrics and I found the message in them really poitive....so please get back with me to let me know. For now its going on my faves. k? oh and if I were to use your lyrics in my cd they would be recongnized as yours.....thank you an dplease write back.

Sincerly,
Christina
| Posted on 2006-07-10 00:00:00 | by POETRY | [ Reply to This ]
  "how many times
will i speak my mind
and say the words
i don't mean"

I love that.

In my opinion, you're never too young to love. I hate it when they say that. A lot of people mistake certain feelings for love, but that happens at every age. So who's to say how you feel?
Well.. you are. And I think you said it wonderfully here.

"Things do change between people, but if you still feel the same way inside as you did when you were together, you can't say that too much has changed, it's still the same inside."

That couldn't be more true. You described it perfectly.

I can give you nothing but compliments.

Shit. Appearantly, I have spyware. lol I have to go.

Great job
-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-07-08 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
  It's nice to see something of yours back on here Kriss! I was pumped to read this!! I really like this one!!! It flowed perfectly and was just simply amazing. I'm not sure how many of your writes I actually tried (key word being tried) to find something to criticize or if I did try but this one is perfect.


"you're still the boy i used to date
and i'm still the girl who will wait"


That was my favorite part out of the whole thing. It pretty much says your dedication here too. But before I say anything about what I think of you two, I need to know whats going on before I speak. Anyways great job and I hope to hear from you soon!!!


Brenna
| Posted on 2006-07-09 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]


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