every turn a new beauty when pointed to the light.
This is packed Chrystine and I'm glad to have found it today. It is clever how you have changed the tense in the second couplet because it becomes the "I" and one is who looking through the viewer. It pulls more meanings this way, doesn't it?
Reminds me of a portrait by Picasso, I'd rather have lumps in my mashed potatoes than risk eating the flakey stuff!
I love this. This is really beautiful, and wow, I loved the final stanza the most, because it is so true, and wow. The Gods bless you for this light on the truth. Wow, this is so true. Tsk...I love this, and all I can say is how good it is. Congratulations once again, Chrystine, you are truly wise, and blessed. Peace,love,light,euphoria, Aya*
I like the metaphor running through this poem, as I think it is very original. The second line is by far my favourite, I love the word play on the word even, very clever. However I would like to see some more definate imagery in here. I think its a great start and amazing potential but it doesn't seemed quite finished. Not that it needs to be longer (as I like short poems lol), I just think you need to develop it more. Anyway very nice poem,
This one I really like Chrystine This write can have so many different meanings to people But to me it expresses great truth that The Lord is the light of the world Without him there would be no happiness He is everything He is the Savior Of The World Great Job with this one again Chrystine I am making this a Favorite God Bless Ron