Description: just a lil sumtin to get back in the groove
Dignity of Man -------------------------------------------
Started writtin when i was 14 had a dream
Of this crop i wanted to be the cream
Lyrical greatnest writtin on this little shy-boy face
It was obvious i didn't have to eat to get my grace
Didn't have to go to church to be forgiven
My doomed prophosies have already been written
So the nick name me the neo-nostradamus
Using my pen as he used his stylus
Stylelized lyrics read to you as a journel
A testament of time because my lyrics stay eternal
But hes not a thug like the rest man his shit is gay
But a man only curses when he has nothing to say
In a blink of an eye my life was just washed away
Im on 15 But ya'll comparin me to Jay
But the question is where do i stand
On this fine line on the dignity of man
Am i evil or just ignorant to my misdoings
Don't know wether my God is renewing
Renewing my access card into heaven
Rising from opertion as if my soul was leaven
But dont get my wrong i did i little dirt in my life
Dedicated to my poetry as if it were my wife
So will i take the elevator to heaven or fall to the hells
This is my life i have nothing else to tell
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hi bubz, i loved this, the flow was tight, this one grabbed me and pulled me in to ur life, if that made any sence, anywayz its gonna be added to ma favz, you def back in ur groove and im glad u r, keep em cummin kyrenia
hi bubz, i loved this, the flow was tight, this one grabbed me and pulled me in to ur life, if that made any sence, anywayz its gonna be added to ma favz, you def back in ur groove and im glad u r, keep em cummin kyrenia
hi bubz, i loved this, the flow was tight, this one grabbed me and pulled me in to ur life, if that made any sence, anywayz its gonna be added to ma favz, you def back in ur groove and im glad u r, keep em cummin kyrenia
Hallelujah! This was very good. it was short, but packed a poweful lyrical punch. I loved the way you put your heart on the line, baring your sloul so we see your mind and heart. I loved the woridng and the flow. I feel you are at that crossroads and that you are defining the man you are and aspiring to the man you wish to be. This is a fav!
This was suprisingly good. I didn't expect it to be, but that shows how first impressions can be wrong. :D I can't say that I have any constructive critism. I don't think you should change anything. I really like the rawness of this. It feels like you were just pouring your soul out through the poetry. Great Job. LeAnna
yo' this is nice, I"m feelin this, I guess its kind of a flow about you... the style was different than what it usually is...iono what about it is different than everything else butj....
Didn't have to go to church to be forgiven My doomed prophosies have already been written
Stylelized lyrics read to you as a journel A testament of time because my lyrics stay eternal
so i guess ur not worthless after all. this [censored] was pretty good. a lot more raw then the what i used to write but i've started to censor myself a lot less. pretty deep [censored]. i guess it's good enough to go on my fave list
Submission Name: Dignity of Man
