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What else is there to say

Author: justkillme08
ASL Info:    18/F/MA
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What else is there to say

What more do you want from me,
I still have a broken heart,
It's still torn in peices,
I have no trust left,
I'm so scared to death,
Its been a little over three months now,
Since me and you.
Sometimes I wonder why,
I still think about you,
Then I remember why I do,
It's cause deep down inside,
You were my first love,
And I still love you.
It's not as easy,
To just let go of someone you loved,
For you loved them,
And you know that love was true,
For there forever apart of you.
I sometimes wish it was easier done,
Than said.
Because then I would forget about you,
But instead,
I'm stuck with all these memories of me and you,
And at times I dont mind them replaying in my head,
For some make me laugh,
But for the most part I hate them,
Cause they end up making me sad or mad,
And for most of them they make me cry.

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