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    dots Submission Name: ** Perfectiondots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 619
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 445



    Description:
       This is just a taste of what I feel like right now. That's about all I have to say. Thanks to everyone who's been commenting. :)


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    dots** Perfectiondots
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    I can't take this pressure
    Of being so perfect
    I can't live up to your standards
    So just let me down
    I find it hard that you expect me
    To be able to fix all our problems
    The problems that only you yourself can fix
    Now stop bothering me
    To get better grades
    And get better friends
    I like my life just the way it is
    Besides your bickering for me to be perfect.




    Submitted on 2006-07-09 16:40:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      So true. I also wrote a poem with the same cinario. I am no longer allowd to hang out with two of my best friends b/c im a bad influence...its not exactally the same but yea lol.

    -Creep
    | Posted on 2006-07-27 00:00:00 | by Mr. Creep | [ Reply to This ]
      i like htis one. i know exactly how you feel. my best friend got pregnant and i wasnt allowed to hang out with her anymore....i got straight A's and it wasnt good enough...nice job

    <3 Adalae
    | Posted on 2006-07-09 00:00:00 | by lifeNsoul1224 | [ Reply to This ]


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