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    dots Submission Name: ** Messed-Up Cupiddots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dots** Messed-Up Cupiddots
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    He's doing everything right
    Using the flattering words
    And the freshly picked roses
    He's asked for my hand
    To take a stroll down the park
    He's told me he loves me
    Unfortunately I couldn't respond back

    I was too busy thinking
    About the one I truly love
    The one I try to flatter
    And the one I hold tightly in my heart
    The one guy who catches my eye
    The one I say I love you to
    Unfrotunately he doesn't respond back.




    Submitted on 2006-07-10 08:35:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this poem it reminds me of a similar situation that i was in He loved me i din't really love him so i said goodbye one day and said I love to someone elses face to the person i truly loved
    | Posted on 2006-07-10 00:00:00 | by LovesAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww, i like this...It reminds me of a guy that likes me but i never...really....liked him...that way...anyway i liked it....i could feel the emotion. good write.
    | Posted on 2006-07-22 00:00:00 | by ollie_wicked | [ Reply to This ]


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