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    dots Submission Name: Not For Medots
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    Author: EsCaPisT
    ASL Info:    17,Female,Singapore
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 42/38/38
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 883
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    Description:
       i'm not sure if people would really get the gist.but it's mainly about forgetting your past mistakes, and move on with life with optimism.it's just how i feel, and what i think i should feel.there are circumstances when life seems to be punishing you, but it is always strength and self-belief that overcomes it all.


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    dotsNot For Medots
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    "i sat in silence
    nothing is wrong it seems
    till the tears welled up in my eyes
    everyone seemes to look at me
    i ignored them
    they weren't the culprits
    it has been me all along
    i manipulated myself
    i cheated myself
    i lied to myself
    i destroyed myself."


    I heaved a sigh
    As i read those words
    I looked up at the sky
    And thought to myself:
    I was grateful, i could see this day
    As clear, as sunny, as bright
    I did not hurt myself
    Even though i might
    I wouldn't say those words again
    I'm strong enough to overcome pain
    "i destroyed myself"
    is not for a girl like me.




    Submitted on 2006-07-10 09:49:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yeah this is optimistic...in a pessimistic kinda way.
    "it has been me all along", personally I think we blame ourselves and others far too much, it's so difficult to take the blame or shove the blame away nowadays.
    Keep moving, the sun shines for only half a day.
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      A big part of life, is making mistakes - learning from them and moving on. Unfortunately, we tend to make the same mistakes time after time.

    I enjoyed reading this, it is well structured and flows well.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-07-12 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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