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    dots Submission Name: Dick and the Dictatordots
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    Author: RedRoseofBlood
    ASL Info:    19/f/outsideyourwindow
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 592/582/135
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       I am just so tired of everyone rallying behind Bush when he is clearly unintelligent. His decisions have killed so many people, and he cares about only himself and his buddies. His policies don't help anyone besides the rich. I know so many people who don't care about the candidates at all they just elect the conservative because they are supposed to be the most Godly. I am sorry, but I would rather have gay marriage legalized than see more than 2000 soldiers die. >.< Sorry about the rant. :D Anyways, if you have any title suggestions I would appreciate it. This is a horrid title. And I don't like the ending, so if you want to help there please tell me.


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    dotsDick and the Dictatordots
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    We watch as our president
    Manipulates and ruins every foreign relationship
    This is no longer a democracy, but a dictatorship
    His inherited war, our billions fund
    Useful programs cut for undiplomatic fun
    2000 plus dead
    And it all hangs over our heads
    A nation of idiots
    Call it quits
    Give up and turn blindly to prayer
    Why should you worry or even care?
    Put the responsibility on the Lord
    Cut the cord
    Distance yourself at any cost
    It's not your problem, not your fault
    Elect the conservative, cut the liberal's throat
    Effectively commit suicide, but leave no note
    Leave no trace, give no reason
    Of why you have executed treason




    Submitted on 2006-07-10 16:51:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That's so much what folk are saying ... and that's here in Australia! Someone told me the other day that it's like watching a wierd soap opera called "The Dumb And The Witless".

    "When he is clearly unintelligent" ... "Because they are supposed to be the most Godly" ... your introduction is as good as the poem!
    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      maybe Blind trust. Executed Treason, Dick and the Dictator. I think I like the last one!!! and for the record I still beliecve that although many voted for him becasue of his self serving realtionship with God, many others voted against him, too bad those votes didnt count, twice!!!
    | Posted on 2006-07-10 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]
      I totally agree with you dear, you did well expressing the thoughts of alot of people's feelings about DUBYA... lol. I like the ending myself, especially this line:

    Elect the conservative, cut the liberal's throat
    Effectively commit suicide, but leave no note

    That was a really powerful part for me, you speak the truth my dahlin'. Keep up the great work.
    | Posted on 2006-07-11 00:00:00 | by precious_poetry | [ Reply to This ]


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