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    dots Submission Name: Sonnydots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Description:
       I wrote this about my new puppy. Hes so crazy, and he tends to make me that way. But he is still my little love. I can't help but love the life out of him lol.


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    dotsSonnydots
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    You have the cutest face,
    And the softest fur I've ever touched.
    Your bark is so adorable,
    I love my puppy so very much.

    The nyou turn on me,
    And start to chew everything up.
    You piss all over my floors,
    When I'm not looking you tip over my cup.

    You bite on my jeans,
    And follow me everywhere I go.
    You drag the laundry out of my room,
    And then you expect a treat....

    When I take you out to potty,
    You roll around in the yard,
    Then I try to bathe you,
    But you splash, and make it so hard.

    You demand my constant attention,
    And eat everything under the sun.
    Then leave a steaming present for me,
    I think you do that just for fun...

    But I suppose you are worth it.
    You always brighten sorrowful days.
    Your kisses and cuddles will always,
    Make up for your annoying ways.




    Submitted on 2006-07-11 01:21:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awwwwww! A happy puppy poem!

    *Loves puppies*

    I have a puppy poem titled, "Happy Little Being" or something like that. This was awesome to read something by someone who loves their puppy too!

    YAY!

    BCute<3
    | Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      wow you love your puppy very much and thats a good thing. i wish i had a a pet. well any ways i like the way you formated it
    it was kool


    fana
    | Posted on 2006-07-11 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      The nyou... typo? i see all the work that comes with having a puppy after i gave my neices one!!! good thing my sister doesn't mind becasue thekids get all the cuddles and she gets all the work!!! enjooy your puppy
    | Posted on 2006-07-11 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very cute and sweet. xD It does seem like you love the life out of him. My dogs are very annoying as well, but I love them despite this. They are just too cute to stay mad at. I am sure Sonny is the same way. What kind of dog is he?
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2006-07-11 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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