This is really deep To me this write expresses a child who was shunned by others for no particular reason and really only had a set amount of friends who were the other children children ridiculed and faulted mostly because they didnt understand why someone is different Children can be so cruel I was one of those children myself I never really had a best friend growing up except my Mother I understand this poem perfectly You did an excellent job with this God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
This was very good for a first time villanelle. I personally know how hard it is to write one of these pieces, for I wrote and posted one myself titled Eleanore. I liked the way you gave the reader a brief glismpe into this battle and your imagery was good. I think you did a very good job.