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    dots Submission Name: Skindots
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    Author: babiejay
    ASL Info:    18/ F/ D-ville
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 38/53/23
    Words: 261
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
    Total Views: 947
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1726



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    dotsSkindots
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    I drift away to a place
    Another kind of life
    Take away the pain
    I create my paradise

    Everything I've held
    Has hit the wall
    What used to be yours
    Isn't yours at all

    Falling apart, and all that I'm asking
    Is it a crime, am I overreacting

    Oh, he's under my skin
    Just give me something to get rid of him
    I've got a reason now to bury this alive
    Another little white lie

    So what you had didn't fit
    Among the pretty things
    Never fear, never fear
    I now know where you've been

    Braids have been un-tied
    As ribbons fall away
    Leave the consequence
    But my tears you'll taste

    Falling apart and all that I question
    Is this a dream or is this my lesson

    Oh, he's under my skin
    Just give me something to get rid of him
    I've got a reason now to bury this alive
    Another little white lie

    I don't believe I'll be alright
    I don't believe I'll be OK
    I don't believe how you've thrown me away
    I do believe you didn't try
    I do blame you for every lie
    When I look in your eyes, I don't see mine

    Oh, he's under my skin
    Just give me something to get rid of him
    I've got a reason now to bury this alive
    Another little white lie

    Oh my permission to sin
    You might have started my reckoning
    I've got a reason now to bury him alive
    Another little white lie

    Jessica Johnson




    Submitted on 2006-07-11 15:07:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this alot, it was very emotion. You did very good
    | Posted on 2006-07-11 00:00:00 | by Babykatty | [ Reply to This ]
      Jay,

    We're into "SONGS" I see..............just wait, just wait on me!!!

    Oh, you didn't tell me you wrote a song, that's okay.
    I'm gonna get you yet!

    Jokes aside, this is good. Is this one you were talking about on the phone? Let's get this straight.............this is not about a guy you liked? Yeah, right!

    U r a head of me for now. take care, luv ya
    | Posted on 2006-07-11 00:00:00 | by bigfineq | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your lyrics they express emotion that is overwhelming and just by reading them I can feel what you feel and its amazing how you porttray such feeling with you lyrics this is one of my favorites.
    | Posted on 2006-07-11 00:00:00 | by LovesAngel | [ Reply to This ]


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