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Not even a shadow


Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60 /93 /58
Words: 82
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Not even a shadow


You fall into me without grace
But with ease.

It's easy to mistake
Or fake
Love
when you make me feel
the way you make me feel.

Shattered then put back together
I fall apart then feel no longer scattered.

You seem to always understand and know
Even though I have never told
The people that I've been
The places that I go.

It's dark in me
But you only see light
Not even a shadow.




Submitted on 2006-07-12 16:21:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  damn i mean this isnt the best poem that i read but wow right when i got to the last line i got the chills this is awesome. i think i could have been made longer but hell what do i know when it comes to your heart i love this hun good job...would love to read more of your work.

all the love
nikki

*kisses*
| Posted on 2006-07-12 00:00:00 | by nikita2u | [ Reply to This ]


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