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    dots Submission Name: The Truth Behind The Glamour.dots
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    Author: ZXDPrince
    ASL Info:    14/U/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 14/21/15
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 136
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    dotsThe Truth Behind The Glamour.dots
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    "So," he smiled,
    "Tell me, everything,
    He grinned.
    And none of that crap about sex drugs and rock 'n' roll."

    He chuckled and gave him a wry smile,
    "Alright, you wanna know the truth?
    It's all about the thrill,
    It's about the adrenaline rush,
    It's all about the fame."

    "Is that all?" He asks,

    "It's about the high," he continues,
    Stoned faced and eyes empty.
    "It's about the dirtiness,
    It's all about the underground,
    and the drugs.
    Screw the glamour. There is no glamour.
    It's all seedy back-street clubs and rolled up fivers.
    That. Is what it's all about."

    "Oh," he replied,
    A confused stare.
    "I'm sorry I asked,
    And the good parts?"

    "I already told you all the positives,
    What more do you need?"
    It's a way of life,
    You get used to it.
    You even learn to like it.
    Hell, you learn to depend on it."
    A slight smile came but no more,
    The last glint behind his eyes,
    Disappears.
    He surrenders.




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      Wow, I loved this poem, the words and all. The only thing I didn't like was your use of quotes. How you have them at the beginning and end of each line is slightly disrupting your piece, because the reader is trying to figure out whose talking. I'd just put one quote at the beginning of the first person talking, then when their done speaking. And the same for whoever else speaks in the piece.

    Lia
    | Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ]



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