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Myspace


Author: Mr. Creep
ASL Info:    16. Female. Here
Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 96 /177 /112
Words: 46
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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lol. myspace is taking over!! and i have one! ahhhh ps. if you liked one be sure to read some of my other ones.


Myspace



There is blood on the computer,
a virus running through.
It just attacked my innocence,
and I can't blame you.
But I feel as one of them,
a clone of internet junkies.
I cant seem to erase my profile,
because im one of the myspace monkies.




Submitted on 2006-07-13 12:47:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  aha
this is great
its true and made me giggle
and yea i have myspace too
and i am obsessed
got caught in its spell
ahaha

great job!
:] Mandi
| Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by Is this love? | [ Reply to This ]
  funny
| Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]
  I haven't gone over to open a My Space account. Just having an account here and a Blog is enough for me! LOL!

This was a little write that made one giggle. You show that you have a sense of humor. Tha is a value when in poetry.

Good job!

Li Li
| Posted on 2006-07-27 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
  lol, this is funny & true. i like it but u spelt innocence wrong. zowell

{{ Lynoire }}
| Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by xanarchyxdream | [ Reply to This ]
  Cute :) Made me smile and think abuot how addicted to Myspace we all can be. But yet we still keep comming back. Its a great write. Keep it up!
| Posted on 2006-07-18 00:00:00 | by fallen_angl_2 | [ Reply to This ]
  Pretty cool write. I am a MySpace monkey/junky myself.
| Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by EseanB | [ Reply to This ]
  lol nice....
| Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by JPalm | [ Reply to This ]
  lol, yea, i have a myspace account, cuz i'ma dork :P this is really cute tho :)
| Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by Jenni Bean | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm guessing you're not a fan of myspace, neither am I, and its short sweet and to the point, I like it..so true..too true..

-Anya
| Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by FarawayFeelings | [ Reply to This ]


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