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    dots Submission Name: Myspacedots
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    Author: Mr. Creep
    ASL Info:    16. Female. Here
    Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 96/177/112
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1053
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 292



    Description:
       lol. myspace is taking over!! and i have one! ahhhh ps. if you liked one be sure to read some of my other ones.


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    dotsMyspacedots
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    There is blood on the computer,
    a virus running through.
    It just attacked my innocence,
    and I can't blame you.
    But I feel as one of them,
    a clone of internet junkies.
    I cant seem to erase my profile,
    because im one of the myspace monkies.




    Submitted on 2006-07-13 12:47:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      aha
    this is great
    its true and made me giggle
    and yea i have myspace too
    and i am obsessed
    got caught in its spell
    ahaha

    great job!
    :] Mandi
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by Is this love? | [ Reply to This ]
      funny
    | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by LovelyGoddess | [ Reply to This ]
      I haven't gone over to open a My Space account. Just having an account here and a Blog is enough for me! LOL!

    This was a little write that made one giggle. You show that you have a sense of humor. Tha is a value when in poetry.

    Good job!

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2006-07-27 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      lol, this is funny & true. i like it but u spelt innocence wrong. zowell

    {{ Lynoire }}
    | Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by xanarchyxdream | [ Reply to This ]
      Cute :) Made me smile and think abuot how addicted to Myspace we all can be. But yet we still keep comming back. Its a great write. Keep it up!
    | Posted on 2006-07-18 00:00:00 | by fallen_angl_2 | [ Reply to This ]
      Pretty cool write. I am a MySpace monkey/junky myself.
    | Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by EseanB | [ Reply to This ]
      lol nice....
    | Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by JPalm | [ Reply to This ]
      lol, yea, i have a myspace account, cuz i'ma dork :P this is really cute tho :)
    | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by Jenni Bean | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm guessing you're not a fan of myspace, neither am I, and its short sweet and to the point, I like it..so true..too true..

    -Anya
    | Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by FarawayFeelings | [ Reply to This ]


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