If I could.. by schemingdevil22

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Submission Name: If I could.. dots

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Author:	schemingdevil22
ASL Info:	17/female/lawrenceburg
Elite Ratio:	1.98 - 26/32/25
Words:	66

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	105
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	401

Description:
written about/to a friend of mine who was hurt and i didnt know what to do to make it better

If I could.. dots

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If I could.....
forget all my empathy
then I could just let you be
lost in my dear apathy
basking in your silent screams

the problem is...
I cant do that
your sadness is like a trap...
so I sit here and watch you
wishing I knew what to do
to rid your eyes of despair
and the pain thats written there

Submitted on 2006-07-13 14:41:54 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I feel this poem from personal experience.

Pretty good write even tho it's a little short. No real complaints.
| Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by EseanB | [ Reply to This ]

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