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Stir the soul

Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60 /93 /58
Words: 38
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Inner growth

Stir the soul

Dig deeper within
But dig quietly
Do not wake the ghosts
But you MUST stir the soul

Inch by inch
measure by measure
Stir the soul, dig deeper
Feed the hunger
But do not wake the ghosts

Submitted on 2006-07-13 16:42:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  great title. It makes it that much better of a poem. Anything that has to do with the soul in a great. Because poetry is basically from the soul.

I also liked how you said to dig deep, but not to wake the ghosts. It made it interesting. I didn't get the full meaning of this poem, but I thought it was good.
| Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by Dylan fan | [ Reply to This ]

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