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Youthful soul


Author: LadyMerlina
ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60 /93 /58
Words: 57
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Youthful soul


-I will not be forgotten or pushed aside
Sidestepped or left behind.
You're all I've ever wanted in this life.

-In my dreams, you come at night
Leaving me confused with no end in sight

I want the truth, give me no more lies
Have we forgotten eack other?
Have we pushed each other aside?




Submitted on 2006-07-13 16:49:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like it, it's short and sweet.
I can see you standing in the hallway
telling him "He betta recognize"
Give me more.
The Poor Man's Poet.
| Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
  It's more like a conversation. He talks to me first, then I respond that he haunts me (because btw, we can't be together). The rest should be in unison.Thanks for reading though!
Looking foward to reading your stuff.
| Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by LadyMerlina | [ Reply to This ]


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