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    dots Submission Name: My thinkings (random quotes)dots
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    Author: Maki
    ASL Info:    17/ female/ home
    Elite Ratio:    5.04 - 208/210/69
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I was bored on the way home from my aunts house. ( im in one state, she's in another) so I just wrote down things that came to mind. Tell me if they make any sence


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    -+-It feels like Death on a Pogo stick
    one wrong bounce and it all topples over.

    -+-Time can crawl like a snail or race like a cheeta but usually there is no walking pace. Deal with it.

    -+-A girl asks, "Do you know where it is?Or do we have to find it?"

    A boy replies, " Nope. Just like I dont know where the spider webs are in the basement until I turn on the light. You have to find the light switch. I dont thing we've found our light switch yet, so just hold on until we do."

    -+- The furthest you can see into the future is as far as the horizon is.

    -+- You're only as wise as your word choice is

    -+- Sometimes the best apology is not "I'm sorry", but "I'm REALLY sorry".

    -+-My thoughts are all too often reflected in my eyes.

    -+-You can always tell when he's trying too hard to show his feelings. So what should you do about it? Smile and make him even more nervous :)

    -+-I have a secret smile that only one person knows how to get

    -+- Sometimes there isn't any other words than the ones you have to describe it.




    Submitted on 2006-07-13 19:27:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      -+- The furthest you can see into the future is as far as the horizon is.

    Hahaha! These are indeed wise and witty. Make them into Bizarre Haiku and we can see what happens next

    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-03-28 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      "You're only a wise as your word choice is" is my favourite here. That is unbelievably true! I mean believably true. Incredibly ... no, er exaggeratedly true? Superlatively veracious. Nah. Cool saying, though!
    | Posted on 2007-03-26 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      good lines, but you should try to take a few of those and turn them into something more...think about it for a while, and surprise us with something inspiring...
    give me a pm if you do decide to continue...i really liked the first one, and the light switch one...
    | Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by was_i_ever_real | [ Reply to This ]
      This seemed like some pretty good writing. I usually expect to read poetry on here, but this was different and it was good. I especially liked the one about how life has no walking pace. Sometimes its so true.

    You should post more if you ever have the chance or inspiration.
    | Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by Dylan fan | [ Reply to This ]


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