Description: I was bored on the way home from my aunts house. ( im in one state, she's in another) so I just wrote down things that came to mind. Tell me if they make any sence
My thinkings (random quotes) -------------------------------------------
-+-It feels like Death on a Pogo stick
one wrong bounce and it all topples over.
-+-Time can crawl like a snail or race like a cheeta but usually there is no walking pace. Deal with it.
-+-A girl asks, "Do you know where it is?Or do we have to find it?"
A boy replies, " Nope. Just like I dont know where the spider webs are in the basement until I turn on the light. You have to find the light switch. I dont thing we've found our light switch yet, so just hold on until we do."
-+- The furthest you can see into the future is as far as the horizon is.
-+- You're only as wise as your word choice is
-+- Sometimes the best apology is not "I'm sorry", but "I'm REALLY sorry".
-+-My thoughts are all too often reflected in my eyes.
-+-You can always tell when he's trying too hard to show his feelings. So what should you do about it? Smile and make him even more nervous :)
-+-I have a secret smile that only one person knows how to get
-+- Sometimes there isn't any other words than the ones you have to describe it.
"You're only a wise as your word choice is" is my favourite here. That is unbelievably true! I mean believably true. Incredibly ... no, er exaggeratedly true? Superlatively veracious. Nah. Cool saying, though!
good lines, but you should try to take a few of those and turn them into something more...think about it for a while, and surprise us with something inspiring... give me a pm if you do decide to continue...i really liked the first one, and the light switch one...
This seemed like some pretty good writing. I usually expect to read poetry on here, but this was different and it was good. I especially liked the one about how life has no walking pace. Sometimes its so true.
You should post more if you ever have the chance or inspiration.