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    dots Submission Name: Sick and Tired Remix ft. Maninthemirrordots
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    Author: Poeticprincess
    ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333/325/104
    Words: 573
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsSick and Tired Remix ft. Maninthemirrordots
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    ((maninthemirror))
    see this is sickness/
    I'm tired, and your the reason get lifted/
    some called it gifted/
    I call bitchness/
    I can't take this/
    you got me so mad over nothin, this is bull shit/

    ((LadyD))
    i use to sit and talk about
    how i'm just for show
    i loved u to death
    but then again u don't know
    and u use to treat me like i was
    something u just don't want
    but now i'm tired of it all
    i'm not about to front
    now i'm here
    thinking bout the shit u say
    if u really wanna leave (leave)
    i'm not here to make u stay
    if u really wanna go
    pack your bags be on your way
    i'm not gonna take this no more from you
    be on your way

    ((chours))
    cause i'm sick and tired
    of u tellin me i'm wrong
    ur a boy not a man
    i need someone whose strong
    playin me like a game
    i'm not taking it no more
    so if u wanna leave (leave)
    go ahead walk out the door

    ((Mrs. A))
    my friends would say
    kick him out he's doing u wrong
    but i would shake my head
    and tell 'em that u were strong
    and now i'm sitting here
    thinkin about this relationship
    ur the one that let it go
    i'm through with your shit
    and now i'm here
    thinking bout that shit u say (say)
    if u really wanna leave (leave)
    i'm ain't gonna make u stay (oh no)
    if u really wanna go
    i'll pack your bags so u'll on your way
    i'm so sick and tired of you
    it ends today

    ((chours))
    cause i'm sick and tired
    of u tellin me i'm wrong
    ur a boy not a man
    i need someone whose strong
    playin me like a game
    i'm not taking it no more
    so if u wanna leave (leave)
    go ahead walk out the door

    ((Bridge))
    i use to cry sometimes
    i use to ask myself
    why u do me wrong
    was it somebody else
    but now i realize
    that i really don't have to cry
    you gotta leave (oh oh oh)

    ((maninthemirror))
    the fact of the matter is I"m in love with you girl/
    and I can't get you out, you created my world/
    but what you don't know is that I'm hurting inside/
    last 2 years man, they all been a lie?/
    questions such as these been haunting my dreams/
    these are the reason for the low of my esteem/
    but when we were together, you kept me so calm/
    now my mind races, like and anarchy, your gone/
    its so depressing, it was all too swift/
    now we ain't together, so my minds gone adrift/
    thiinking thoughts not occured in quite a few years/
    think of me as a car, well you done fucked up my gears/
    now I don't have the transmission/
    or the ammunition/
    to keep talkin is for what I'm wishing/
    I just remembered how your body glistened/
    I love you so much, I hope you choose to listen/
    or else I"m fishing/
    in a lake of fire/

    ((chours))
    cause i'm sick and tired
    of u tellin me i'm wrong
    ur a boy not a man
    i need someone whose strong
    playin me like a game
    i'm not taking it no more
    so if u wanna leave (leave)
    go ahead walk out the door




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