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Untitled


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 94
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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like you know how u write a poem and can't find a name so it's atomatically untiltled? i decided to save everyone some trouble and make it untitled lol. Anyways this is dedicated to those who..well you'll see.

Lady D


Untitled



Young black females..
who are we?
we are the children that
refuse to express ourselves
girls who with
only one sentence from a man
will undress ourselves
we have been labled dumb and slow
and who will mostly to grow up to be
video hoes....
but who made us fixated
on this sterotype
why do we lay back and open our thighs
when we can stand up and fight?
Why should we use sex as a weapon
an expression, a drug
why not wait to like
better yet....
why not wait to love?




Submitted on 2006-07-14 12:50:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  you are a rebel and you know how to send your message in the best way. I bowdown to you.
Only if people in this world think starts thinking like you do, this world could become a lot better place.do title it cause without title its like a arow without direction.
| Posted on 2006-07-14 00:00:00 | by imagination | [ Reply to This ]


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