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    dots Submission Name: Untitleddots
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    Author: Poeticprincess
    ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333/325/104
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 814
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 593



    Description:
       like you know how u write a poem and can't find a name so it's atomatically untiltled? i decided to save everyone some trouble and make it untitled lol. Anyways this is dedicated to those who..well you'll see.

    Lady D


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    Young black females..
    who are we?
    we are the children that
    refuse to express ourselves
    girls who with
    only one sentence from a man
    will undress ourselves
    we have been labled dumb and slow
    and who will mostly to grow up to be
    video hoes....
    but who made us fixated
    on this sterotype
    why do we lay back and open our thighs
    when we can stand up and fight?
    Why should we use sex as a weapon
    an expression, a drug
    why not wait to like
    better yet....
    why not wait to love?




    Submitted on 2006-07-14 12:50:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you are a rebel and you know how to send your message in the best way. I bowdown to you.
    Only if people in this world think starts thinking like you do, this world could become a lot better place.do title it cause without title its like a arow without direction.
    | Posted on 2006-07-14 00:00:00 | by imagination | [ Reply to This ]


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