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Till Another Came Along


Author: invisiblerose
ASL Info:    20/F/USA
Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 17 /24 /6
Words: 247
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I was with a boy for a year, he destroyed me. and then after a long time, a friend moved back into my life. and I realized how lucky I was to have this friend back. Who is now my boyfriend. "To infinite and back again." is a quote dirrectly from my boyfriend. :)


Till Another Came Along



From his life I was pushed away
Told to be gone
Informed we were done

What did I do
Questions streamed my mind
I cried all night
Why oh why?

I held on
For far too long
I didn't want to give up
Never on us

He kissed me again
"I love you" escaped his lips
But it turned out to be a mistake
I cried yet again

He left me for another
What happend to love?
Why did he hate me so?

Jealousy overcame him
But he hid it from the world
Accusing me of lies
I did nothing to deserve his cruelty

Still we remained friends
Didn't want to end
Wanted that slight chance
To remain his love

But now I see
I was just a toy
There for his ammusement

Another made me real
Told me I was beautiful
Loves me to this day

Oh what would I do with out you?
I would still be in love
With that boy that tore me apart
Still saddened by the thought of never could be

But now I love you
And I would never go back
I realized for once what I was worth
And how someone shows their love.

Thank you for helping me discover
I owe so much to you
I love you until the depths of time

Until forever ends
You will be my one
"To infinite and back again"




Submitted on 2006-07-14 18:43:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked the idea. In fact I loved the idea. It's funny how it happens. At the time, you think "Why did this happen? I'll never move on." and then boom, someone incredibly amazing comes along and makes us realize that what we once believed was wrong and now it's just right.
The poem is well written.
| Posted on 2006-07-14 00:00:00 | by Lies | [ Reply to This ]


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