Ode to a past boyfriend who won't be named
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Ode to a past boyfriend who won't be named
people make mistakes so mistakes is true how many do i gotta make 2 understand you the reason why you left the reason why i stayed the reason that my mind is so fucked up today rapping my soul with you lying and cheating i stopped believing and u stopped decieving i'm supposed to be strong yet you made me weak so i'm making this ode 2 u or so to speak i'm not dissing u i'm just inlisting u so you can understand how under pressure i stayed true no i know young love is overrated so missused i hate it but with this new guiy i can't abused just know you fucked it up 4 u. |
Submitted on 2006-07-14 18:54:01 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| k, so I just finished writing a poem almost the same basic gist of it all. So naturally I know what it feels like. I liked the poem, it moves well, and it tells how you feel. poems don't always have to use metaphors. and sometimes it's nice to just be blunt. Nice job :) "Emily Martin" | Posted on 2006-07-14 00:00:00 | by invisiblerose | [ Reply to This ] | ok, so the beginning started out kinda general, ina great and philosophic way, and then at the end you got really personal (which I have to admit made me feel a lil uncomfortable), that is just my take. Well done, sounds like it felt good to you to get this out... keep writing! shalini bridges | | Posted on 2006-07-14 00:00:00 | by sbridges | [ Reply to This ] | this is pretty good....the way you rhymed the words made me think of how I would do it...I thought that was kinda cool | | Posted on 2006-08-03 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ] | |
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