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    dots Submission Name: When She Smilesdots
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    Author: lynxstarfire
    ASL Info:    26/Feline/MD
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 100/106/54
    Words: 387
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWhen She Smilesdots
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    When she smiles to me and her light up It fills my heart with warmth and peace,
    Her laughter fills my head with gentle tickles of electric passion exciting and intoxicating,

    When she looks into my eyes I can see her soul so delicate behind her silent shell,
    I want to pull her close into my arms, to keep her safe from the rest of the world,

    When she touches me, my skin sings with waves of fiery pleasure engulfing and addictive,
    Her skin pressed to mine fills me with pleasure of a nature that no drug could ever bring,

    When we walk hand in hand for all to see i walk proudly with her walking beside me,
    I could ask for no other nor would i want to because of the happiness she gives me,

    And everyone says that we're really quite different and I oftentimes am reminded it's true,
    But all the differences really don't matter when you truly love someone who also loves you,
    No power in the world is greater than true love and true love is as blind as blind can be,
    I will always love her and i also know that no matter what she'll always love me,

    When I know that she's happy i can't help but smile and wish it to last for a while,
    And when she looks in my eyes and i know what she's thinking i can't help but get a bit hot,

    I'll always desire and crave her kiss and always need to feel her touch,
    noone else in this world could ever compare or even hold a candle to the feelings we share

    And in spite of the arguments or occasional fight she is my angel and my guiding light,
    without her I would feel quite incomplete and i know that she feels much the same,

    And everyone says that we're really quite different and I oftentimes am reminded it's true,
    But all the differences really don't matter when you truly love someone who also loves you,
    No power in the world is greater than true love and true love is as blind as blind can be,
    I will always love her and i also know that no matter what she'll always love me,




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