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    dots Submission Name: Invincibledots
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    Author: XxMusikJunkiexX
    ASL Info:    18/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 109/134/39
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 776
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1035



    Description:
       Lyrics to a song I just wrote. I wonder if anyone can figure out what it's about.


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    dotsInvincibledots
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    Two million god fearing believers
    armed, ready to kill...
    armed, ready to kill...
    the thirsty ground calls for more bloodshed
    I am theirs, I am their leader

    INVINCIBLE
    I AM INVINCIBLE
    I AM INVINCIBLE
    I AM INVINCIBLE

    The air we breathe is static
    and the war we fight is fake
    but the more we lose the harder it is
    to fall, to be alone

    INVINCIBLE
    I AM INVINCIBLE
    I AM INVINCIBLE
    I AM INVINCIBLE

    Fear is my angel
    My pain is my God
    I'll bleed for salvation
    then fuck it all up

    Fear is my angel
    My pain is my God
    I'll bleed for salvation
    then fuck it all up

    Two million god fearing martyrs
    dying alone just to feel alive
    I am their leader, lead me to salvation
    I am their leader, lead me home

    INVINCIBLE
    I AM INVINCIBLE
    I AM INVINCIBLE
    I AM INVINCIBLE




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      this is different but its awsome.
    if u have 2 million God fearing people on ur side u shall surely be invincible.


    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-07-15 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      "The air we breathe is static
    and the war we fight is fake"
    very strong lines.
    this piece leaves you thinking about things.
    whether they be specific thoughts to what the readers own understanding of the work is or as to what you were thinking when you wrote it.
    i am very interested in finding out what brought you to write this.
    i also want to know what type of music you set it to, and what it sounds like put together.
    let me know.
    ~lauren
    | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by blahblahgurl | [ Reply to This ]


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