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    dots Submission Name: What's in a wish?dots
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    Author: lynxstarfire
    ASL Info:    26/Feline/MD
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 100/106/54
    Words: 278
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1105
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    dotsWhat's in a wish?dots
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    A wish, a wish...
    what's in a wish?
    a dream, desire,
    want or a need?
    Who chances fate,
    and broken heart,
    when on wishes chance,
    they place their fate,
    relying not on self or skill,
    decieving themselves,
    and footing the bill.

    A wish a wish..
    who makes a wish,
    a little child, or tasty fish,
    a spriteful maiden,
    or spoon and dish,
    or two young teenagers,
    experimental kiss,
    he dreams and dream,
    and asks the gods,
    he rolls the dice,
    and tempts the odds,
    in hopes that all their effort's made,
    might bring forth to them an amount of gain,
    to validate the risk,
    of possible pain,
    all for a free coin,
    placed on a name.

    A wish, what wish,
    what tasty dish,
    fair maiden or damsel,
    to the stars might ask,
    for handsome man,
    or young fair lass,
    her beauty begged,
    her beauty took,
    all other suitors,
    for her forsaken,
    she dreams and wishes,
    and continues to beg,
    that one day chance,
    or mayhaps fate,
    might see her plight,
    and give cause to bring,
    a rescue party,
    with young brave knight.

    A wish, yes wish,
    let all of the stars,
    reveal true beauty,
    both near and far,
    to all who see,
    or recognize,
    the truth of reason,
    behind the lies,
    revealing secrets,
    debunking false information,
    united against evil,
    though sadly mistaken,
    for refugees,
    from planet mars,
    or aliens from cuba.

    A wish yes wish,
    for happy fish,
    to swim with dolphins,
    and think and kiss,
    and have their families,
    alive and safe,
    protected and cared for,
    and safe from hate,
    hidden from the taint,
    of humanity,
    existing in perfection,
    slight insanity......




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