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    dots Submission Name: Do you Wonder?dots

    Author: lynxstarfire
    ASL Info:    26/Feline/MD
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 100/106/54
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDo you Wonder?dots

    Do you ever wonder why,
    the birds they fly up in the sky,
    and yet no matter how we try,
    we find it hard to catch a fly?

    Have you ever asked yourself,
    the reason you're in such good health,
    or in it bad if you have felt,
    the painful kiss of flames from hell?

    Do you laugh and dance aglee,
    or do you try to never see,
    the fairy singing happily,
    as you climb higher in the tree?

    Will you take a walk with me,
    I've got something to show to thee,
    that you might find a cause to be,
    free from your bonds to walk by the sea?

    There is a place that we must go,
    but if i take you noone must know,
    and there You'll see what i will show,
    and in the seeing you will know.

    The angels cry and demons laugh last,
    as director sets loose upon the cast,
    and noone even ever asked,
    the reason why their pain came fast.

    nightmares dreams,
    lies and truth,
    fears and screams,
    age and youth,
    love and hate,
    bliss and rage,
    peace and sorrow,
    respect and shame.

    Submitted on 2006-07-14 23:39:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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